Dark Shock - My storyboard idea

As we (Team Paradox) decided the name of the game trailer we each had to create a storyboard with the game name as its focus, the name was Dark Shock so I created a Dark and Creepy storyboard idea, once we finished we are going to gather all our storyboards together and choose which one will be used as the game trailer. Here is my game trailer storyboard (click to enlarge):